Theo the Manic

Character Name: Theo

Desired Bloodline: Hyouton bloodline if possible


Desired Starting Element:water


Desired Village: Hidden in the waterfall, Takigakure


Age: 17

Desired Rank: Chuunin if good enough

Appearance: Ill get a picture

Character Personality: Lay back, at ease with the world at hand. Will do anything to protected the ones he loves and cares for. Loyal to his village and clan.

Background Info: When i was a kid I was under alot of stress in the house hold, being the oldest guy in our house hold, our father was murder by a missing ninja, I had to take care of my younger siblings. Mother was to caught up in her job after dad died to even think about us. When i joined the academy i had become more relaxed and lay back. After graduating from the academy decided to leave my old life with the newly developed skills of a ninja, to start a new adventurous life. The life of a ninja!


Rp sample: I walk down a narrow path as the trees tops are shaking. The cold breeze brushes my face as i think to myself "Its getting ready to rain." I pull my hood over my head as the drops of water start to fall from the sky. I pull my hands back down to my sides after pulling my hood over my head.

Please fix up some grammar errors :S The sample isn't bad but its small if you could amp it up a bit great. The Background isn't bad but the grammar there is

Your RP sample has good grammar, just do the same as you did there.....with the Background and personality x.x

please Check it Traven.

Up the Rp sample...