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Theo the Manic

Post by Theo on Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:38 am

Character Name: Theo

Desired Bloodline: Hyouton bloodline if possible


Desired Starting Element:water


Desired Village: Hidden in the waterfall, Takigakure


Age: 17

Desired Rank: Chuunin if good enough

Appearance: Ill get a picture

Character Personality: Lay back, at ease with the world at hand. Will do anything to protected the ones he loves and cares for. Loyal to his village and clan.

Background Info: When i was a kid I was under alot of stress in the house hold, being the oldest guy in our house hold, our father was murder by a missing ninja, I had to take care of my younger siblings. Mother was to caught up in her job after dad died to even think about us. When i joined the academy i had become more relaxed and lay back. After graduating from the academy decided to leave my old life with the newly developed skills of a ninja, to start a new adventurous life. The life of a ninja!


Rp sample: I walk down a narrow path as the trees tops are shaking. The cold breeze brushes my face as i think to myself "Its getting ready to rain." I pull my hood over my head as the drops of water start to fall from the sky. I pull my hands back down to my sides after pulling my hood over my head.


Last edited by Theo on Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:11 am; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : found the blood line i wanted to be in. fix some grammer.)
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Re: Theo the Manic

Post by Taven Naïlo on Sun Jun 07, 2009 4:44 am

Please fix up some grammar errors :S The sample isn't bad but its small if you could amp it up a bit great. The Background isn't bad but the grammar there is
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Post by Taven Naïlo on Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:01 am

Your RP sample has good grammar, just do the same as you did there.....with the Background and personality x.x
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Re: Theo the Manic

Post by Theo on Sun Jun 07, 2009 5:11 am

please Check it Traven.
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Re: Theo the Manic

Post by Seraph on Sun Jun 07, 2009 8:15 am

Up the Rp sample...
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