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Post by Koddy on Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:48 pm

Character Name: Koddy Sino


Desired Bloodline: Ill Make my own, and register it


Desired Starting Element: Lightning


Desired Village: Sound


Age: 11


Desired Rank: Chuunin

Appearance: Covered in White clothes, gloves, where nothing but his head is showing. His hair is pitch black and longish. His eyes are Light gray normally, nearly white.


Character Personality: He is a person who doesn't like making friends, but knows how to treat people. He doesn't like much company, and is short on thought, and limited to what he says. He doesn't like talking to people, and doesn't like questions.


Background Info: When he was young he always disliked the way his parents treated him. They always crowded him, and always asked the obvious questions when something went wrong. He broke when one day his father asked "Would you rather achieve everything and do nothing, or would you rather work for it" He knew that if he said the first choice he would get in trouble, if he said the second, he would get a "Then why don't you try" So he said he didn't know, and ran away. He went through most of his life hidden, and not trying to get anywhere. He then one day found himself in a known world, he knew where most of the world was for most of his traveling. Through that traveling he grew in leg strength and speed, and grew weak in his punching attacks. He was always trying to get through his weaknesses and gain nothing but strength, so he decided to find a place, and stuck there, and began to train, then he soon gained arm strength. One day then, he found himself in a fight with someone much stronger then him. He knew he couldn't beat him, he knew he couldn't outrun him, so he attempted to fight him, at least enough so he could possible escape him. In the middle of the fight, he noticed his opponent weakening from all the work. He then kept going on and on, until the opponent couldn't do much anymore, realizing his dexterity. Soon after he grew the need to fight, to exceed those around him.


Rp sample: The child stood there looking into the distance where he saw his opponent. He was confused though, thinking it was a bystander just watching the fight. So he waited for his opponent which he thought wasn't here yet. He looked around noticing no one was around but him. He wanted to say hello to the so called bystander, so he walked to him. As he got closer he started to recognize the opponent and wondered why the opponent didn't get his attention. When he got close enough for casual talking he began to ask the question "Why didn't you get me? I have been waiting here for you?" After asking he noticed the opponent started to look at him. He looked into his opponents eyes noticing the red eyes. He backed away quickly, as if he was scared. When he got 14 feet away from the opponent he started to run away, Suddenly the opponent flickered in front of him. He realized the opponent didn't have a headband like himself, so then he stopped thinking the person was friendly. He began to ask another question "Are you a friend, or are you an enemy?" As he waited for the answer he blinked once his eyes half wide after they reopened. He was surprised about the Flicker, not knowing what that technique was. As he waited just in case the answer was "Enemy" he began to slowly and quietly draw a kunai from behind his back, out of his back pocket. He was half scared, and half not worried about him. As he kunai left his back pocket, it didn't make a sound, and he held it behind his back, in a way that wasn't obvious.

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Re: Koddy

Post by Seraph on Fri Jun 05, 2009 5:52 pm

Denied for now up the age and more for the rp sample and fix some spelling and grammar errors also until your Bloodline is posted ill keep this on hold....
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Re: Koddy

Post by Koddy on Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:46 pm

Alright, i made him 11 though, so if the RP sample failed, it would be an Ok genin age, but an ok chuunin age too. Also I have Spell check, there are no errors on my screen x.x

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Re: Koddy

Post by Takimoto-kun on Sun Jun 07, 2009 11:48 pm

Actually, Spell Check does not check repeated words ("He" word is quite worn out there).

Not saying it's bad, just that you could use your character's name and/or adjectives that one connects him with (young boy, ninja, shinobi, troubled kid, etc...)

And... Errr, One could accept that... But make BL thingy... Then approved.
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Re: Koddy

Post by Koddy on Tue Jun 09, 2009 2:33 am

I have no explanation without a more advanced character...then i can start using adjectives and those words like young boy, like i use ghostly figure on TNR

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Post by Takimoto-kun on Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:52 am

(young boy is good for ANY type of 11 year old kid o.o')
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Re: Koddy

Post by Koddy on Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:26 am

Ill make a new one...

Character Name: Koddy Sino


Desired Bloodline: Unknown for now


Desired Starting Element: Lightning


Desired Village: Sound


Age: 18


Desired Rank: Chuunin

Appearance: Covered in White clothes, gloves, where nothing but his head is showing. His hair is pitch black and longish. His eyes are Light gray normally, nearly white.


Character Personality: He is a person who doesn't like making friends, but knows how to treat people. He doesn't like much company, and is short on thought, and limited to what he says. He doesn't like talking to people, and doesn't like questions.


Background Info: When he was young he always disliked the way his parents treated him. They always crowded him, and always asked the obvious questions when something went wrong. He broke when one day his father asked "Would you rather achieve everything and do nothing, or would you rather work for it" He knew that if he said the first choice he would get in trouble, if he said the second, he would get a "Then why don't you try" So he said he didn't know, and ran away. He went through most of his life hidden, and not trying to get anywhere. He then one day found himself in a known world, he knew where most of the world was for most of his traveling. Through that traveling he grew in leg strength and speed, and grew weak in his punching attacks. He was always trying to get through his weaknesses and gain nothing but strength, so he decided to find a place, and stuck there, and began to train, then he soon gained arm strength. One day then, he found himself in a fight with someone much stronger then him. He knew he couldn't beat him, he knew he couldn't outrun him, so he attempted to fight him, at least enough so he could possible escape him. In the middle of the fight, he noticed his opponent weakening from all the work. He then kept going on and on, until the opponent couldn't do much anymore, realizing his dexterity. Soon after he grew the need to fight, to exceed those around him.


Rp sample:
Koddy flickered in on the area, looking around. He wondered what would happen if he would stand here, he wondered if it would annoy people. After a couple seconds he began to walk, his sword on his side moving as each step goes by. He then stopped again, looking at a fellow that stood in front of him. The man then looked around, and began to draw his sword out of the sheath. After it was removed from the sheath he brought his hand to his side, and stopped looking around. He then waited for the person to move, holding his sword in his right hand. His black hair blowing in the wind.

Suddenly the person moved, and you could notice he was holding a sword also, and then Koddy jumped back a small ways and then got into a sword stance. He then waited for the person to move. Seconds later, the person noticed him and began to walk toward him. Koddy wondered what the person was planning so he decided to yell out "What are you here for?". The person just kept walking toward him, making him nervous. Koddy then decided to ready himself for anything, such as an attack or something, also watching the person closely. The person then spoke "Because...I can be, my name is Lusha by the way" Koddy then waits for Lusha to do anything, while he waited he noticed that Lusha was rising his blade.

Koddy put his sword up for a faster block, just in case, and then Lusha swung at Koddy. Koddy quickly moves his sword in the way for a block. Then he swung at the person, and Lusha was late in reaction and it got Lushas leg, and his tendon, so he fell to the ground. Lusha swung at Koddy, but Koddy was higher, thus allowing him to quickly block the attack, and then he swung down on Lusha's shoulder, cutting his shoulder down, and his arm off. Lusha was bleeding out, so Koddy just pushed down Lusha onto the ground with his foot, and the blood kind of shot out, and got on his white pants. Koddy then moved his hair out of his face, and tried to whip off the blood spreading it. He then tried to was it off with some water, just spreading it, and now half his leg was red. He was mad, and just began to walk off, giving up.

After some walking he began to get bored, remembering his sword was in his hand. Koddy then lifted his sword, turned it, and slid it into the sheath. Soon after, he turned around, looked around, then turned back around. I walked a couple steps, and noticed that nothing was happening around, and wanted to remove the stain from my pants leg. He then looked down at his pants leg, and then back up toward the sky. The man then flickered off into the distance, headed toward who knows where, just looking for something to do, and a place to remove the stain on his pants leg.

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Re: Koddy

Post by Seraph on Wed Jun 10, 2009 3:36 pm

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