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Koga Kinoske

Post by Koga Kinoske on Thu Jul 09, 2009 10:13 pm

Character Name: Koga kinoske

Desired Bloodline: N/A


Desired Starting Element:water


Desired Village: Mist


Age:18


Desired Rank: Chunin


Appearance:my avitar


Character Personality:A happy go lucky additud with a hint of apsint-mindedness.Always loves a good fight but dose not wish to kill any liveing cratcher unless he needs to.Dosnt try to hard but always gets the job done just take alot longer then anyone els, not to mention a complainer, the only thing that keeps him motivated is lots of food and fighting.He will still fight even if he knows he will lose the battle.



Background Info: Koga is an orphin from a pore small village near the mist, he often dreamed of becomeing a strong worrior just like Zabuza-sama. So he left his village and trained for 11 years travleing from village to village chalenging any swordsman he could find. He later bacam an outlaw takeing waht he won in duels and doing what he loved most pissing people off.Other then a few brokin bones his enames live to tell who beat them so mre will come for a fight.After a few years of cracking skulls he overhears that is childhode idle has fallen at the hands of the leaf. Now fuled with reveng Koga seeks for ultimet power to distroy the villege of leaf.The only thing he regrets in his life is killing his own family and village.While on his quest for power he finds an old sword smith, the swords smith offers koga to make him a sword if he would be his apprintes.Koga agreas to the obligation, after months of tranig and hard work the old swords smith foges two sword for koga befor the old man passed away.Koga lives on useing the same sword the old man forged he named them Karasu, and Gaikotsu named after his brother and sister.


Last edited by Koga Kinoske on Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:55 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Age : 28
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Post by Seraph on Fri Jul 10, 2009 9:48 am

Choose only one starting element...and if you want chuunin youll need a better rp sample and better spellling, punctuation and grammar. Denied for now.

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Post by Koga Kinoske on Fri Jul 10, 2009 5:58 pm

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Post by Seraph on Fri Jul 10, 2009 6:34 pm

...fix spelling errors there are still to many...start to proofread your work anyway there is no Dotou here -.-

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Post by Koga Kinoske on Fri Jul 10, 2009 10:55 pm

ok i think i got it this time
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Post by Seraph on Sat Jul 11, 2009 1:36 am

...take your post...and paste it on word...fix the spelling errors there....learn from it then repost....

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