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Post by Sekkai N. Kaguya on Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:22 pm

Character Name: Sekkai

Desired Bloodline: Kaguya

Desired Starting Element: Fire

Desired Village: Leaf

Age:14

Desired Rank: Chuunin

Appearence: Avi & Siggy

Character Personality: Sekkai Is a very shy girl. If you just come up to her And Say "Hi" She would Probably Be silent and just stare at you. Though, once you get to Know her, she becomes very Open.

Background Information: When Sekkai Was five Years old, Her Parents Were Killed By A group of men Who hated Her and her family. The men Killed her parent and Took Sekkai Away And Raised Her As A killer. They trained her and raised her. Each night, Sekkai Would try to find a way to escape the men But she couldnt.
At this time, Sekkai was about eleven or twelve When she foud out a way to escape. When The group of men were sleeping, Sekkai Snuck Out and Wondered around Untill she found the Leaf village. She Joined them and Learned to be gentle and caring, as she is now. Sekkai Has Very big trust issues which is wy she is so shy Though over time she gets to trust easier.

RP Sample:
Sekkai Walks Up To The Strange Man in The distance slowly, As She approaches him, she Taps him on the shoulder, Wondering who he is. "Hello, Sir?" She Asked in A light tone as she felt A Gust of Wind Blow By her, Whiping her Black Hair Agianst Her Face. Sekkai Stood very still, though she wanted To run away, She couldnt help but wonder who the strange man was. She tryed lifting er feet to wak away silently but it Seemed As if HEr Feet her nailed to the ground. She Waited for The Dark Man To turn Around, Nervously.
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Re: Sekkai-chan

Post by Takimoto-kun on Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:25 pm

I see a few grammar and punctuation mistakes >.<

For Chuunin, add more for RP Sample, Sarah.

Denied =/
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Re: Sekkai-chan

Post by Anti Osira on Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:27 pm

The personality should also be added up, Takimoto-kun. As in the template it is stated that the personality should be thorough. The background seems very imcomplete also.
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Re: Sekkai-chan

Post by Takimoto-kun on Mon Jun 08, 2009 8:32 pm

Correct (it's that time around midnight that i get sleepy, need to wait 30mins to wear that off). =/

And do not edit, REPOST >_>
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Re: Sekkai-chan

Post by Sekkai N. Kaguya on Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:27 pm

Character Name: Sekkai

Desired bloodline: Kaguya

Desired Starting Element: fire

Desired village: Leaf

Age: 14

Desired Rank: Gennin

Appearence: Avi And siggy

Character Personality: Sekkai Is A Very shy 14 year old girl. she has alot Of trust issues, Therefore She Is Very Shy. When Introducing herself To somebody, she Usually Taps Them On the shoulder or speaks quietly. The more She grows to trust somebody, the more out going she gets.


Background Information: Sekkai Was born October 3, 1994. She Was raised by her real family untill she was 5 years old, when a group of men killed her Family. The Men took Sekkai away from her regular home and raised her themselves. Each Night, when the men Were asleep.. Sekkai snuck out and wondered around the area untill she found the Leaf village. At the time she found it, she was only eleven years old. she grew up in the Leaf village, playing with the other children untill she reached her current age, 14. she abandoned her friends and kept to herself. She Stopped Trusting Everyone and anyone, Only fighting when Needed. She Now continues being Kept to herself, Not Talking to anybody.. Not Trusting anyone.

Rp Sample:

((Sorry The background isnt Long..I couldnt Make up that much))
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Re: Sekkai-chan

Post by Takimoto-kun on Tue Jun 09, 2009 11:50 am

Approved.
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